It's Mello here, a writer who just realized that writing was his only hope at having a profitable life and is now working really hard to improve his skill of it. not to say that I'm writing for money of course...but I have to do something for money. Basically I came to this site to get good feedback on my work, and if need be, to have my prose mercilessly picked apart and analyzed for its blatant wrong-ness. I know that writing sites always have a big problem with getting a pretty unbalanced amount of feedback for all the stories posted, so i'll be sure to drop a review on every piece that I feel qualified to judge. I hope that those reviewed by me will come read my pieces in turn, and also I hope that my feedback will help everyone who receives it. once again, hello all, this site is really awesome and I'm glad to be a part of it.