Hello my fellow men and women, gentleman and ladies, murderers and thieves. I have come here to join amongst you fine people. I write poetry, a play and novels. I try to do some of this, but I lack the ability to edit. I always think of a way to make my writing better, and I hope someone here can help me, but give me an honest critique and not too harsh, because there is a fine line between help and just saying this is rubbish. I'm 17 and live in England. A country to be proud of, America's mother. Well, I hope I make as many friends as possible, but I really need some people's help, I promise I won't plagrise and pester anyone. But I will try and help if possible.