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    Help! ideas on vampire vs vampire fight PLEASE

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by Gazcav, Feb 20, 2011.

    Hey any ideas for a fight between 2 vampires vs a harass vampire slayer who is also a vampire..Note:the slayer has a stake the side of a sword
     
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    What do you mean, ideas? You've given us nothing, no details at all.
     
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    It is hard to kind of leap in to the fray, but I find that evil creatures are really big on the "humor" factor, taunting each other in the midst of their tussles.

    My only idea off the top of my head, have one of them ask, "What did the one vampire say to the other vampire?"

    (I don't have a punch line at the ready... there must be something, though...)
     
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    As Lemex said, you've told us nothing about the context of the situation, so it's going to be hard to help you in a relevant way.
     
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    Make them bite each other and stuff.
     
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    Just adding to this. Since you didn't give us much to go on, assuming both vampires are of equal strength and speed, the fight would probably devolve into a battle of wits. Whoever makes the other lose his temper first and stumble, gets the edge in the fight.
     
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    One idea is to find a game of Vampire: The Masquerade, or an offshoot of it like Dark Ages, and if not participate, watch. You'll see fights between vampires...most of it involves different techniques and skills, not so much wits, but with witty enough players, it can get that way too!
     
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    Vampire 1: Ah, surely we will attack you!
    Vampire 2: Yes, yes! And fight you as well!
    Harrass Vampire Slayer (who is also a Vampire): Back, villains! I've a stake the side of a sword!
    Vampires 1 & 2: Curses! Foiled again!
     
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    Response of the Day Award
     
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    This sounds like a job for, Thor Sullivan : Vampire Commando.
     
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    I would suggest watching the Vampire Hunter D movies, or reading the novels. There are a lot of thoughts that could spur you on from those.
     
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    Bestest of all-- have it come down to a "oh my God I don't believe he fell for that" moment-- depending on how crucial this battle is to the overall plot-- you could have one vampire suddenly point off into the distance and say, "Oh-oh, look at that!" And when the other vampire pauses to look, the first one lasso's him with a clanky chain made of silver or something. I may have seen too many Jackie Chan movies to be helpful, here...

    Fights between equals always seem to end in a draw-- the reader may instinctively sense, by this point, which vampire is superior. It would be only logical for that one to prevail.
     

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