Just an Idea Set in the mid Georgian Era, around about 1785. A young middle class man, no older the 20 is hired to work for a higher class family, one of the richest in England. He is hired to work as a stable hand, gardener and general care taker of the mansions vast grounds. The family consists of five children, two young boys aged 9 they are twins, two older girls, one is 17 the other is 18, and a babe. The young man, on arrival falls in love with the eldest daughter and she falls in love with him. But in those times a love like that was not meant to be. She walks with him while he is ok on gardening duty’s, goes riding whenever he is on stable duty and one day while out for one of their walks/In the stable, they find themselves kissing. That grows and turns into constant meetings, excuses to no end to spend more time together. But like we said, Love like this was not meant to be. A young handsome man from her mothers friends family, her eldest son. He is here to win her heart, and marry her. An arranged marriage of course. She must go along with it and pretend, the poor man truly believes that she loves him. She continues to meet with the stable hand, hardly but it is enough. But no good thing lasts forever. The wealthy man spots her with him, kissing, holding hands and laughing. He becomes angry. He confronts her about it and she promises to stop. She lies, she continues to see the stable hand. She is spotted again, the wealthy man is distraught. He tells her that if she does not stop, he will kill the boy. She is scared, upset and so very scared. She runs to tell the stable hand who then tells her to run away with him, that way they can be together. She accepts, he tells her to bring only what is necessary, she gathers the things. Just a they get to the stable to ride away though, the wealthy man is waiting for them. With a gun, he argues with her and the stable hand, he becomes upset and angry, going to shoot the boy. She runs to block the bullet, the shot killing her. The stable hand falls to the ground with his beloveds corps and begs the man to finish it, to kill him as well so he can be with her, and he does. They lay in each others arms, finally together at last, in death. Please tell me what you think and what I could do to improve !