Hi all, I am 14 and inspired by other Teenage writers - I am in between writing a novel - "Haunted Town". The story goes like this, - There are 2 main characters one boy and one girl, They both are brother and sister. They move to a new town, In this new town people don't seem friendly. There are haunted happenings going all around the town, James had just made a new friend, Miley, they also go together for a Ball Dance, But James don't know if she is alive or... They saw a mysterious figure and blood stains that came from the basement of their house The housekeeper Miss Marry knows a lot about the Basement's Ghost and guides the children to solve the mystery, But the mystery too didn't leaves her and engulf her with it. There are many haunted happenings going in the town with James and her sister Ema and all that is linked to the Basement, but what was it? Would they be able to find it or the mystery will engulf them with it?? Did you like it, I have written half of it, But tangled at a point. So please give me the following suggestions: 1) I want suspense, something that the reader's won't be able to predict. 2) I want to increase horror in my novel. What could be a stuff that will terrify you? 3) How will the ghost end?? Please help me with it as I am amateur in the field, I had been writing it since 7 days and wanna complete it in fifteen days.