Hey guys if anyone is bored enough to help me with some feedback I got on a rejected story it would be greatly appreciated. So I just got a reply for a short story submission I made, it was rejected, for some reason I had a feeling that would happen... Anyway back to the point in the feedback I got "wooden dialogue" does this mean dialogue which is not like normal conversation ? And "disjointed narrative" which I thought meant non linear but that is what i was going for so possibly means something else ? Also "very rapid jumps in place and setting without warning " I knew it was like this but not sure how you give warning, any advice on how to do this? I thought it was pretty good to get this much feedback and hopefully it can help me improve Thanks for reading !