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    Hey guys!

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by Emonailpolish, Sep 26, 2009.

    Hi. I'm new, obviously. I'm a poet, or at least i consider myself one. I don't often show people my work because I am afraid of what they will say. Here I will post all my recent poems for all to read. Just be honest with your opinions and give me as much critizism as you can. I need all the help I can get if I want to ever be published.
     
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    mammamaia nit-picker-in-chief Contributor

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    welcome!

    i'm sure cog will be around any minute, posting his advice on posting, so don't put anything up yet...

    as for your goals, i'm a full time poet and i mentor many aspiring ones, so if you want any private help, just drop me a line... otherwise, the other folks here will provide you with some feedback and advice, when you qualify for posting your work...

    love and hugs, maia
     
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    I'll deffinately go to you when I'm in need of writing critique. There are some really good poems up here. I'm terrible at giving advice and critique though. My comments are sadly, very pathetic.
     
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    Hello ENP, Welcome to the Writing Forums.

    Before you can get critique, you must first give critique. This is not just a quid pro quo, it is because improving your critiquing skills is the primary focus of the Review Room workshop. Improving your critiquing skills will improve your ability to find and fix weaknesses in your own writing.

    Posting your own work should not be among the very first things you do here. It is worth taking the time to see what other people have done to improve their writing, and see if some of it applies to your writing as well. That is part of why we require members to review other members' work before posting their own for review. On the other hand, there are no restrictions, other than content and copyright rules, on showcasing your work in your member blog.

    Also, be aware that posting a piece of writing on any public site, including this one, will greatly diminish your chances of selling it for publication. Removing the writing later does not alter that fact - once posted, it is irreversibly considered published. So do not post anything more than a small excerpt of any piece you are planning to submit for publication.

    If you haven't explored the site yet, you should probably do so soon. Newcomers often gravitate to the Lounge, the Word Games, or the Review Room, but there is much more to be discovered if you poke in the corners. Remember to check out our FAQ as well, and be sure to read through the forum rules, too, to avoid any misunderstandings or hurt feelings. Respect for one another is our principal mandate.

    As for the Review Room, new joiners often wonder why we do things a bit differently on this site than on other writing sites. We emphasize constructive critique as a vital writing skill. Training your eye by reviewing other people's work helps you improve your own writing even before you present it for others to see. Therefore, we ask members to review other people's writing before posting work of their own. The Review Room forums on this site, therefore, are true workshops, not just a bulletin board for displaying your work (and on that note, please only post each item for review in one Review Room forum). Also, please use the same thread for all revisions and additional excerpts from the same piece of writing. See this post, Why Write Reviews Before Posting My Work? for more information.

    And while you're looking around, don't forget to check out our Weekly Short Story Contest and Weekly Poetry Contest. They actually run more than one week apiece, but any member may enter, and all members are urged to vote for their favorites.

    Enjoy your stay here, and have fun!
     
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    Gigi_GNR Guys, come on. WAFFLE-O. Contributor

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    welcome!
     
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    Hello and welcome Emonailpolish, have fun exploring and learning :cool:
     
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    Thanks guys. I'm sure I'll learn alot from the other members here.
     

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