1. Alecion

    Alecion Member

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    Hey there people

    Discussion in 'New Member Introductions' started by Alecion, May 6, 2015.

    Hello im new here :)
    I want people to read my story and give me their opinion, not sure where to post that... help?
     
  2. Wreybies

    Wreybies Thrice Retired Supporter Contributor

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    Welcome to the forum! :agreed:

    The place you want is the Writing Workshop as regards posting your story for critique. We have a couple of requirements that need to be met before the Workshop can be used, though. You find all the info you need in the New Member Quick Start guide. ;)

    Wrey
     
  3. Gigi_GNR

    Gigi_GNR Guys, come on. WAFFLE-O. Contributor

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    Welcome to the WF.
     
  4. TheWingedFox

    TheWingedFox Banned

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    Welcome, Alecion. Stay the course and thy written work shall be critiqued! :)
     
  5. molliemoogle

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    Hi Alecion! What an interesting name; care to share the story behind that?

    They're all a very friendly bunch here. Welcome to the forum!
     
  6. Alecion

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    Thanks Wreybies, for the directions!

    molliemoogle , there really is a story behind the name, one Saturday I stayed at the army (not by choice) I got bored and had a role play with a few other soldiers during off time, I made up that name then and its the name of a rare ore I made up.


    I liked how it sounded hence its my name here.

    Alecion: A gray stone decorated with deep azure veins, when grounded into dust its a precious ingredient for alchemists, particularly useful for soul related potions and items.

    As I revealed I am a soldier I guess I can say a bit more, I live in Israel, 19 years old soon and serves at the army currently. I love writing but often stops a story after a chapter or two and starts another... but this time I am resolute to complete 24 chapters at the least!
     
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  7. molliemoogle

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    That's an interesting story; thanks for sharing. And I've learned something new.
     
  8. KaTrian

    KaTrian A foolish little beast. Contributor

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    Welcome to the forum, Alecion. :)

    I have a character in one story who grew up in Israel and also served her mandatory time in the IDF... I'd have so many questions for you, but is it ok for you guys to talk about the army life to outsiders?
     
  9. Alecion

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    Well its fine, of course I cant say some stuff but lots is unclassified and is fine to talk about so sure just PM me and ask
     

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