Hi, whoever's reading this. I'm Demidrake, but you can call me whatever you want as long as I can tell it's me you're talking to. I'm not very picky with names. I like cats and writing and I don't like clicheness or boring and/or generic beginnings, middles, or endings, but I especially don't like that kind of beginning. It turns me off very quickly, kind of like cigarette smoke, except it doesn't smell half as bad. Long question on reviewing: On another forum, I always review by just quoting the entire chapter and fixing spelling/grammar mistakes in red and commenting in blue. I'm not sure whether it's allowed here or not. Normally, I would just review first and ask later, but seeing as that other forum I mentioned is slightly more lenient than this one, I want to make sure before I do anything. Thanks in advance Edit: Just in case I threw in one too many run-on sentences and you didn't understand half of what I was talking about, here's an example, with "corrections" in red, comments in that pretty blue color, and normal writing in default(normal writing here also consists completely of blah): By the way, I'm weird, sarcastic, and annoying, just in case you hadn't noticed.