I'm reviewing some scripts on zoetrope and I've noticed some word choices that seem out of place. Example: "Each bunk is full with another homeless man." First, there is the passive voice. Second, the use of the word full. While it's not terrible, it seems perhaps out of place because full gives me the impression of something filled with an uncountable noun, such as a glass full of water or bowl full of rice. I haven't submitted my review yet, but this is one place I marked for constructive criticism. Zoetrope does annual contests and so far, this script is pretty good. It's easy to read, has a good character web, pretty good dialog (some I've marked for CC). I think it's good enough to go high if not all the way to first place, but it needs some tweaking. Am I being too nitpicky? Am I stepping on toes? The people running the site want reviewers to give CC, but where is the limit?