I'm having trouble with this sentence. It just doesn't sound right. My main issue is the quote. It's not a credible quote, just something I thought of. How do i incorporate that into a sentence. Maybe I should put it into italics? After a quick glance at Michael Moore’s excerpt Idiot Nation taken from his book Stupid White Men you may think to yourself “great, another anti-Bush liberal”.
You leave out the double quotes and put a comma after yourself: If it were a spoken quote, your original sentence should have had the period inside the quotation marks. This may help: He said, she said - Mechanics of Dialogue
