1. irbyma7297

    irbyma7297 New Member

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    how to give hints on bad guys name without giving it away?

    Discussion in 'Plot Development' started by irbyma7297, Dec 23, 2011.

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    okay, some of the book is in the bad guys perspective,
    I want it to be a mystery/crime,
    So i can't give their names away.
    Please and thank you!
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  2. Brandon P.

    Brandon P. Active Member

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    Simply refer to him by a common noun (i.e. a noun that is not a name), such as "the man/woman".
     
  3. irbyma7297

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    okay, but i was wondering how i could hint who they are.
     
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    Boh, stuff like the traces they leave behind can say a lot about who the person is to someone who has an eye for the details. or if he walks or talks in a certain way, something you mentioned briefly when introducing him/her but didn't put any emphasis on. i don't know if this was any help.
     
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    oh, yeah! that's great!
     

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