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    how do you have a demon do good and bad

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by chandler245, Apr 16, 2009.

    I have a demon MC who is still under orders by the devil but is also under orders by someone eles, (good) person, how do you separated the two with out the SC finding out. That MC did a bad thing. Any Help PLEASE
     
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    There is a game called Disgaea 3, which subverts this idea of yours. This MC is an honor student at Evil Academy, where it is good to be bad and bad to be good.

    Otherwise, it would be easier to help you if you gave more information about your idea.

    Have you thought about having the MC taking orders telepathically? No one would know.

    COURTESY OF WIKIPEDIA: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Disgaea_3
    The game takes place in a Netherworld school called the Maritsu Evil Academy. In this demon school, a good student is one who engages in delinquent activities such as ditching classes, or not doing homework. The student who participates the most in these kind of activities is known as the Honor Student, while demons who arrive to class early and do their homework are known as delinquents. Mao, son of the chairman (possibly a reference to Chairman Mao), has not once attended class since the beginning of school. His ambition is to overthrow his father, who also happens to be an Overlord, and take his title. After reading a few volumes in his manga, Mao comes to the conclusion that "heroes are the ones who defeat devils". From that point on, Mao resolves to become a hero, convinced it will help him achieve his goal.

    Eventually, Raspberyl, the delinquent of the school, learns about Mao's goal and begins to worry. If Mao were to achieve the title of Hero, then it would endanger her position as the school's "Number One Delinquent". She makes up her mind to follow Mao, stop his plan, and once again secure her title. However, since Raspberyl is a demon delinquent, she tries to solve the problem without violence and talk him out of it instead. Seeing this from a distance, Almaz, a hero himself, misunderstands the situation and tries to save the day. Mao accepts the challenge and defeats him, stealing Almaz's title in the process. With the title of Hero, Mao believes he is one step closer to defeating his father and achieving his goal of becoming an Overlord.
     

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