Here's the scenario: I am hoping to make a sort of thriller type of story/book. I essentially want to get to the place where all the good stuff happens while getting some bursts of character development...but I think I may be going too fast. I've already gone through about 5 scenes in just over 4 pages in MS Word. Granted, that's more than that is converted to a smaller book, but still...I went from a couple arguing over bills and discovering that the woman's great-aunt died and left her something in the will, to a short driving scene to build up the characters a bit more, then the reading (literally a paragraph and a bit) and a short dinner, followed by a discussion in their car...all in about 4 pages in MS Word 12 point Times New Roman. Does this feel rushed? Is it justifiable, since the crux of the story comes after they move to the house they inherited? I definitely don't have a full picture of both the main characters revealed, but I've shown a bit...anyway, based on what I've described, do you think I'm going too fast?