Greetings, everyone, this will be my first post here on the forums. I'm a fiction writer who also delves into written role-playing to sharpen my skills and improve character development. Down below is a recurring problem that hampers my skill and sometimes even irritates those reading my work. I cannot seem to keep from overusing either word no matter how hard I try to avoid it.. "In your deepest dreams, far beyond the wall of sleep, exists a world unlike anything you have ever experienced within the boundaries of written fantasy or fiction. Allow your mind to drift into the deepest reaches of the human psyche, past the comforts of sanity, delving into the deepest most uncharted vistas of imagination. While you are here, forget the comforts offered by feeble logic and science, these things held so high in importance on our plane of existence now rendered obsolete." -Nods- I will gladly accept any explanation as to why I have this structure problem and to avoid it.