Hello. I'm very new to writing. Sadly, I'm currently faring really badly in my English story writing class. Would appreciate any tips or help. So my lecturer wants a specific story with all these elements: Exposition, Set-up, catalyst, conflict intro, conflict development, turning point, climax and resolution. But so far, she's been rejecting all my plot (saying its not really relate-able or doesn't make sense) making it hard for me to progress past conflict. My current story is of a young boy of 13 who can see ghost, he is terrified of them because of their appearances etc, so he would ignore them all. But one day at the hospital, he chance upon a young girl spirit who was chase by an evil ghost (in the form of a dark shadow) who wants to eat her spirit to become stronger. Whenever the evil ghost comes, the area becomes dark. They manage to get away and she begged him to help, but he is too terrified to help her. So my current conflict is whether the boy helps her or ignore her as he did like he always did. But in order to push it along, he must help her...but I can't seem to find a good enough reason for the boy to help her...so...any suggestions?