I'm not really asking for help, I'm just wondering how you'd change this story I had in my head since 2003. It was called The Mighty Ninja C. It was a complete rip off of an old Japanese anime show called Dragon Ball Z. The basic premises was the same, really. A bunch of superhumanly powerful people save the world constantly from the monsters. The main characters of The Mighty Ninja C were Mohawk, Mojack (Brother of Mohawk), Davie (Mohawk’s son), Ishim, and Isadore. Back when I was fourteen, I had a kick out of thinking about this peice of crap. It had so many clichés, you wouldn’t even be able to imagine it. Let me list out some for you. 1) Set in the modern world, so they have to hide their Ninja identities. 2) Blind ninja? You got it! That was Davie. 3) Ninja out to avenge a murdered father? That was Isadore. 4) Abusive ninja master? (That was Ishim’s master.) 5) Some supernatural power? That’s how I explained the possibility of Davie to fight with his dad. 6) Katana in a cane? Davie had it. The black top that acts as a handle was also the sword handle. 7) Ninja in a high school? Davie was a fifteen-year-old sophomore with a crush on a girl. 8) Ninja kicks a bully’s arse? Davie again! This is what exposes himself as a ninja to the world. That’s all I can think up of now, but I can assure you that this probably had many other clichés about ninjas as well. While I'm not that wild by redoing it, I'm just wondering what your advice would be should I start it again? What should I keep, change, or remove completely? My ideas: #1- The names must be changed. #2- Remove the vengeful ninja and the whole secret identity. #3- The title, for the love of god. The title!