I guess I haven't noticed before now, but I have a big problem going on in my book:(

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  1. Eurlo

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    I was just wanting to know does guys like beating up each other ?
     
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    Hmm...I think you have a point;)

    Maybe they are trying to tell me something:D Never looked at it that way:) So how do I figure it out?
     
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    Trish Damned if I do and damned if I don't Contributor

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    I'm sure some do, just as some females do. I really don't know. I would strongly recommend you read Promise of the Wolves, though. Excellent book, and it's a fantasy that's about wolves. I think you'd like it a lot.
     
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    Just keep writing it. Let them tell you their story.
     
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    Yeah I guess....so just let them tell their story huh? Will it throw off my readers?
     
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    Trish Damned if I do and damned if I don't Contributor

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    No, because when you go through the editing process you will fix any plot holes, fill in any gaps, and remove any unnecessary information that clutters or confuses it. This first draft should never really make it into a readers hands because it's not what you would ever submit to an agent or publisher.
     
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    Ok so....now to write ....but first I need to think about something.:)
     
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    Should I talk with Eurlo? And if so what should I ask him?
     
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    I've given you every answer I can. Sorry. You have to do this on your own. Just write.
     

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