I'll show you what I mean, here is a paragraph from my fanfic. ==================================================================================================================== He leant out of the doorway, looking left and right before going back into the wrecked corridor. Sarah held onto his hand tightly, keeping a nervous eye on the dark corners of the hallway. Cautiously he stepped out, leaving the room behind with Sarah in tow. He came to the corner and drew his pistol, he turned to Sarah, holding a finger to his mouth. Sarah nodded, all that came out of her mouth was a weak squeak. Slowly, with the flat front of his pistol leading, he rounded the corner, his footfalls making barely a hint of noise, adding to the loneliness of the enclosed space. ==================================================================================================================== I would like to know how I can describe his movements a bit more fluidly. The scene is a tense one since they are in the middle of a warzone, so I want his movements to reflect that of a cautious soldier behind enemy lines.