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    I need help writing vampire slurs

    Discussion in 'Setting Development' started by Laura wise, Feb 10, 2015.

    I need help making up slurs for the vampires in my story.
    The basic idea is that vampires. And humans attempt to co-exist with each other but as in the real world there are people from both races who belive they are superior to each other and so they have racist slurs for,each other. The trouble is I can't think of one, any ideas?
     
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    Slurs for vampires:
    Blood sucker
    Undead freak
    Corpse humper
    Demon
    Long teeth
    Vamp


    Slurs for humans:
    Ape
    Meat bag
    Delusional roaches
    God's drunken failure/God's biggest mistake
    Little brains
    Mortal

    Hope that helps. :D
     
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    For humans:
    Food trough
    Drinking fountain
    Midnight snack

    For vampires:
    Dead pedophile (well, they do get old!)
     
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    A good slur, one that works really well, is one you can bark out quickly. Short, single-word slurs are best for that. You don't always have to bark a slur out at the recipient, but you want that capacity to be there for when the moment arrises. Long, overly complex slurs tend to fail in delivery. So, if you're looking for a set word, the word that's usually used, not the ones that get made up in the moment, look to the short words in the offerings you receive in this thread.

    ETA: Of the offerings so far I like ape as a slur for humans and corpse for vamps. You can get behind both of those words with some serious angry.
     
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    Should have mentioned it's set in modern times
     
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    For humans - Big Gulps

    For vampires - Leeches
     
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    Parasite, Leech^, blood whore, Sucker, corpse, cold-skin, etc. You can make fun of how they're dead, or say they don't have a soul. Anything that involves sucking. Say they're similar to tampons lol. You can really go anywhere you want with it.
     
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    Anemic <insert cuss word>
     
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    An insult I could imagine throwing at a human: - "Toothless...", "short-lifer".
    An insult I could imagine throwing at a vampire: - "Fuck off back to Twilight you pasty twat"
     
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    For Vampires-
    Sucker


    For humans-
    Dinner
     
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    i don't have slurs but more like sayings, warning: graphic content do not enter if easily buthurt

    human to vampire : hey, how do you comb your hair? (a joke about them not seeing a reflection in a mirror)
    human woman to vampire: woman removes tampon and throws it at a vampire and says "drinks on me"

    lol i am horrrible
     
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    Here's a stretch. I think it works because it is close to an existing slur. From the hemoglobin in blood that either vampires suck or humans have, call the vamps or humans hemos.
     
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    Fanger
    Wang fanger
    Whitey (for the really pale ones)
    Blood-tard
    Dust-cunt
    Stake bait
    And of course if you happen to have a white rapper vampire, you could go with the amazingly offensive "wi**erimortis"



    For humans:

    Derp-faced tard-bucket
    Butt donkey

    I imagine that vampires aren't very good at insults. Behind the times and such.
     
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    For Vampires
    Leech
    Sucker
    Bat Brains

    For humans
    Bloodbag
    Half Life
     
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    Vampires

    Buffy fanboy
    Anemic vein muncher
     
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    "keep the sun off your face ace"
     
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    For the vamps go as they did with the Italians call them WOS (Without souls)
     
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    Along the lines of modern 'lolspeak' mistyped words, how about 'count', as in, "you absolute count....."

    Sesame-Street-the-Count-001-64x64.jpg
     

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