i need tips, advice, suggestions, basically just sincere help for my next sentence in this story. This is what i have so far for my 14 chapter: ///Mo's POV/// "Mo?" The only sounds that beat throwout this city's windy air is the subtle sound of humming from the cars that kept the midnight streets alive. I inhaled the sights of the illuminated city lights down below. I in-took the atmosphere of the busy city at night. The street-light people walked through the shadows; with the shadows. "Mo." I felt a light shove on my shoulder that broke me out of my admirable daze. My eyelids fluttered a few times to gain focus. -I dont know words to use to describe when someone zones and then suddenly they come back to focus...any suggestions?