im an english student in palestinian uni. and my teacher asked us to do writing h.work in any topic ... So i`ve written a Paragraph and i want from the native speakers to annotate it ... ya ?? this is the para. 1. In the last war , and contrary to all people ... I found a number of advantages and positive sides that I have not found in the days of my normal live , for example .. I did not meet my brothers for 23 days with continuous as I continued in the war days .. my married sisters were prevented from their husbands to sleep in our family home, but they slept in the war for 23 days because the seriousness of their sites. I hope we do again these days but in fun events .