Hi Everyone I'm Joe from Toronto Canada. I was a self-employed website designer that wants to be a fiction writer. That has been on my mind for the last 25 years and now it's time. I just sold my website design business to work on my dream full time and hopefully within two years I'll have a novel published. For now I've started a website posting a chapter every week or two. That's how I get comments from my friends right now, but you know friends are always too nice and don't always tell the truth. They always say "Oh the writing is very good" instead of saying "Oh you suck at this or..." That's why I'm here. I need some honest criticism on my writing and will be looking for tips on how improve and how to get published and so on. See you all in the forum.