After reading over my draft I'm becoming scared I am being too mean. First the MC loses his right arm, leading to it being replaced by a steampunk-style prosthetic, he then later finds out he has a Bad Luck curse, one which causes all the story's conflicts. I.E His best friend and love interest having his soul ripped in two, the mayor of the town where he lives becoming cursed to rot from the inside out, the other "half" of the best friend's soul having their love interest killed in front of him, and then later being torchered half to death resulting in him going insane and attacking the MC causing him to lose two fingers (middle and ring fingers) and his legs (which are once again replaced.) The vice-mayor also loses her voice completely after being given holy water to drink by the MC by accident. ...I could go one as this isnt even the half of it. Am I going a tad over board?