This line has been bothering me for a while now. "Every time I launch I like to think I won't come back. It makes the end much more...believable." To me, this line does not seem right. The character is very punctuality and blunt. I want to convey a sense of nonchalance, almost like death would be a bad joke. I would like to hear what you guys have to say. I'm open to all opinions and suggestions.