In the Forgotten Keep?

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  1. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    Okay! Magic worked. Now i just need some time to figure out the minor details of my character (male/female young/old street racer/ornithologist minor things like that). But over all I have an idea. Btw, is the ability to control birds/biological matter and metal okay? And do drives use a neural interface or are they controlled mechanically like a car or airplane?
     
  2. Leaka

    Leaka Creative Mettle

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    One or the other birds and biological matter. Or metal.

    Drives are driven by the mind. Like with telepathy to the Drive....so yeah.
     
  3. Honorius

    Honorius Active Member

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    not understanding that first sentence...

    So i can use bird magic and metal magic? or biological and metal?
     
  4. Leaka

    Leaka Creative Mettle

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    Okay after thinking of what to write for the beginning. Guess what. I'm totally totally going to start it now.
     
  5. 67Kangaroos

    67Kangaroos New Member

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    indeed, i'm working up a profile or two and will post it soon~! yay fun to RP~

    by the way, just wanted to clear this with ya first -- i'm thinking that my character will be from the dark half of the world and wants to start time again because the dark side people are taken advantage of by the light side people (have to pay too much for veggies or something or maybe things just cost twice as much for people on the dark half) or maybe just want some time in the sun too. okay or does it go against some of the story?
     
  6. Leaka

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    I like the idea that they want to see the light. But they have never ventured into the light side because it's to bright.
    It would be funny of they were light sensitive.
    Cause there isn't much fighting or ripping each other off.
     
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    okies. i might have to fill in a 'reason/goal' a little later on then.
     
  8. Leaka

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    How about the dark side is prejudice to the light side?
    I think that may actually work.
    I likey.
     
  9. 67Kangaroos

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    yeah, that could work. i was making her some sort of idealistic elitist anyway, so that will work out fine ;) thanks for the help
     
  10. Leaka

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    Thank you for joining Kanga.
     
  11. Deathblade15

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    sweet we got 7 people, you ready to start up this shiz-nit?
     
  12. Leaka

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    Yes, let me write out what I want.
     
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    yay :)
     
  14. Deathblade15

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    yayzers
     
  15. Leaka

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    Okies....editing.
     
  16. 67Kangaroos

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    indeeeeed. hope my reply is okay, didn't have anyone else to go off of yet... since i'm playing two characters, i put one is a brown color so as to be as little confusing as possible.
     
  17. Deathblade15

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    I'd like to suggest that when you talk you put up quotations and not italizations. Italizations are mainly used for thoughts not speech and even then you'd still have to put quotations. Its just for everyone else.
     
  18. 67Kangaroos

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    ah, the italicized is thought, Deathblade. i always put quotes when there's talking going on. i'm into right punctuation ;) and the italicized and bolded is Leaka's writing (thought about making it red, but more than two would just get confusing.)
     
  19. Leaka

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    Red is my GM color.:)
     
  20. Deathblade15

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    yeah you put italicized wording saying to the thing, not thinking to the thing. That's where I got confuzzled.
     
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    ohhhh - you mean the "she answered the voice" part. i see what you mean. it's meant to be an internal thing - thoughts to answer thoughts, so it's gettin' fixed. clarified for uh.. clarity. (i added an "in her head" and a "internal debate" to the mix... it remains that the italicized are thoughts)
     
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    good, that's all I wanted. Also since my guy is walking in a graveyard, how about one of you guys comes and talks to me.
     
  23. Leaka

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    Death you can bump into Enigma and his NPC protector.


    Also I changed Frost's profile. His name is now Rogue and his ability is different.
     
  24. Deathblade15

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    so its enigma and rogue?

    Also I think it would be funnier if I just happened to be crossing the street and the jeep just runs me over, and I get up. Also I gotta go, Kangaroo if you can make that happen that would be awesome

    Wish me luck on the gallon challenge. (I have to drink a gallon of milk in 1 hour)
     
  25. Leaka

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    No Enigma and his NPC, which is Roger.


    Rogue isn't teamed up with Enigma. Rogue is just a wanderer.
     

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