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    International Essay Contest for young people , I need your help

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by nizar622, Jun 18, 2013.

    I'm participating in an international essay contest for young people (under 25) and I'm 18 , I chose to write in English even though i'm not a native and English is my third language , I wrote two different essays with quite different approaches on the subject (Culture) , I can't post them here but I really need someone to read them both , rate them maybe and tell me which one is better , please can anyone help me in private ?
     
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    I'd suggest reading the rules and then proceed from there. Best of luck to you!
     
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    email me at your convenience, nizar... i'll be happy to do it, as i mentor many aspiring writers whose first language is not english...

    love and hugs, maia
    maia3maia@hotmail.com
     
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    Please do not ask for help on your contest entry, and don't request private critique.

    Read the site rules.
     
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    apologies, if i overstepped the bounds in offering to help, cog...

    for the record, i don't help with the actual writing of entries or classwork, only point out errors and explain why they're wrong, so the writers can learn what they need to, in order to improve their writing...
     

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