So, I'm working on a chapter for a book I'm working on. My character is in a bar, playing some darts (just her, kind of tossing them). She's not really trying; just sort of using the darts as something to do physically while she thinks about something. She ends up in a conversation with a random guy that's also sitting in the bar, and the following eventually takes place: I feel like this isn't right, but I'm genuinely unsure as to what would be considered correct. Any help? Thanks in advance.