Hello forum, my name is Billy. I have been working on a book, that I have still not titled, and really I wanted to get pointers, and get something out there for people who not only like to read, but for people who will only read that one or so book, such as myself. I am not verse on many different books, I have read maybe one or two different genres. I have started looking at Tom Clancey Novels, as well as look at currently the Hunger Games, how Katniss develops herself throughout the series through narration, instead of a third person. And really, I just wanted to get some advice, on how to properly develop my characters as well as how to enhance the plot, and make it something you guys would wanna read in general.