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    Iron and Fire

    Discussion in 'Archive' started by Leaka, Dec 21, 2007.

    First they stole our water. Then they set our temples ablaze. Then they took our people.
    Iron an element far stronger then what we had imagined an element so far much greater then ourselves.
    Iron took over our beautifully crafted temples and turned into metal monsters.

    The story is (well its up there.):
    The Iron element also known as Mera took over the people of the other elements fire, earth, water, etc.. also known as Uvan.
    The temples of light were created by Uvan to collect the radiate rays of the sun to power their city. The Mera took over the city and stole the Uvan's life supply. Uvan's can only survive when there is enough life.
    This story takes place in the future year 6017.
    Many people uncovered their ancient powers from a long time ago.
    Now in this story you can be a:
    Mera:
    King
    Lord
    Prince
    Princess
    General

    Uvan:
    Bishop
    Rebel
    Servant
    Begger
    Rogue

    In this story the Uvan Bishop is second in command of the king. There is no religion involved with the Uvan they are ancient people if you understand what I mean.
    Also you don't have to have an element as your power.

    Here is the application:

    Character Name:
    Character Age:
    Character Species: Mera or Uvan
    Character Power: Basic(Elemental), Medium(Mental abilities like telepathy, and Hard(Your Own Power)
    Character Weapon:
    Character History: A little about your character.

    Some Mera Government Officials:

    Character Name: Advisory Crux (Pronounced Cruise)
    Character Age: 48
    Character Gender: Male
    Character Species: Mera
    Character Power: Hard
    Character Weapon: None
    Character History: Crux has followed the young lord for a long time. Crux has focused all his greedy thoughts on the young Lord. Turning the young lord of Mera like him greedy and selfish.
    Appearance: Long pointy nails.
    Wrinkly skin and a white straight hair in a ponytail.
    He wears a black velvet robe with the sign of Mera on it.
    Government Position: Lord's Vassal

    Character Name: Iris
    Character age: 26
    Gender: Male
    Species: Mera
    Power: None
    Weapon: Mera staff
    History: Iris is the child of war. Iris is known for his power and his force. He is the leader of fear. He scares his own men into behaving correctly.
    Appearance: Young and quite handsome. Light armor of Mera with the Mera designs. He has short brown hair.
    Iris has silver blue eyes and has pale skin.
    Government position: Military Commander
     
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    Game approved
     
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    Character Name: Jin
    Character Age: 12
    Character Gender: Male (haha! :D )
    Character Species: Uvan, Rebel
    Character Power: Basic, Air
    Character Weapon: Spear
    Character History: Jin used to live in luxury before the Mera people took over, but once they did, his whole life changed. His parents were worked to death, but he survived by his mother sending him off in a pickle barrel to a land far away. Now, he swore that he would avenge his parents' death by becoming a rebel.
     
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    Kid you were suppose to put:

    Character Power: Basic, Air

    Because we already know Basic is elemental powers


    Character Name: La Moon Leaka
    Character Age: 17
    Character Species: Uvan, Bishop (second in command)
    Character Power: A mix of medium and hard( force fields, and telepathy for medium.)
    Character Weapon: A magical scythe. So its a staff and a scythe.
    Character History: La Moon Leaka is the young Bishop of Uvan. He is second to the king's power, but no one listens to any of his peace ideas.
    La Moon Leaka is treated harshly and everyone seems to be rash with him.
     
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    Fixed it! :D
     
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    Character Name: EXOangel
    Character Age: 24
    Character Species: Mera (Lord)
    Character Power: (can I have two hards?) Psychiatric Genius and Manipulation, and ? (can I keep it secret for now?)
    Character Weapon: Rapier
    Character History: Born into Royalty, Angel was raised and trained by his father, who was a tyrant in his power. How exactly his upbringing was gone about is unknown, but it is clear that he grew little by his father's side, despite the training. His father an expert swordsman, Angel took up a completely different type of swordsmanship when he discovered the sport of fencing. Over the years, his father trained him in the art of the sword - that is, the broad swords in which he was accustomed. But Angel payed him no mind, and merely used what he learned to create his own fighting style with the fencing sword. Eventually making his own weapon version of the sports tool, (his rapier) Angel took both what he had learned from his fathers training and his fencing, as well as some of his own ideas, and made a bizarre but deadly fighting style which he later named "demonicise" (deh-MAH-ni-sis). Involving swift, and deathly agile and quick movements, demonicise is a force to be reckon with, as few have ever seen it before. Growing up defying his fathers wishes, Angel developed a supreme way of controlling him through Psychiatric manipulation, and eventually perfected the talent. Where his other power came from, however, is unknown.

    Angel is a Lord of the Mera government. Known for being extremely kind hearted despite his upbringing, his eyes are wide, and he constantly has a warming smile on his face. Due to his positive demeanor, many under estimate his combat prowess. Little do they know that, due to his Psychiatric prowess, he can easily work at them until their brawn is worthless. When in such combat, his demeanor changes to one just as disturbing as it origionally was warming.
    Description: White hair, white clothes, has an Angelic glow to him. He is constantly smiling. He has a softly shaped face. He has a seemingly fragile figure.\


    Too much?
     
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    ThreeSided, this might be just my personal impression, but isn't he too powerful?

    Character Name: Alcyone "Breeze" SeiFariah
    Character Age: 20
    Character Species: Mera (Prince)
    Character Power: (Basic) Air , Clairvoyance with some psychometry
    Character Weapon: Iron fan and jian Jian - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
    Character History: Middle son between an older brother and a younger sister. Nicknamed Breeze for his gentle nature and use of the wind element.

    Rather than gentle, Breeze is shy and melancholic. He often deals with people (mostly royalty) who come ask him for a fortune-telling to which he mostly refuses. Breeze is pestered by his father who forces him to have more of a political life and opinion, although his son's own beliefs are radically different.
    Breeze detests fighting, but is good enough in sword fighting to do it with a fan (which he always carries with himself). He enjoys playing with kids.
    Description: Black hair, green eyes. Almost always has a sad look.
     
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    I thought of that. But don't worry, he does have some definite weaknesses. I just found it inappropriate for me to post them in his description.
     
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    Why would it be inappropriate? Sorry to pry, and I don't mean to be insulting either.

    Like I said, it's just my personal impression, but since we're on the same team I shouldn't be complaining too much XD
     
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    Klee its fine.
    Threeside yes you can have two hards. He is lord after all.

    Klee his character is a lord. You're not suppose to know his weakness.
     
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    This happening? Seems like we have a lack of interest.

    This RPG = failure?
     
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    I don't want it to be.

    Hmmm.... no one seems to be interested though.
     
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    I'm interested! Are we almost ready to play?

    Character name: Drea (DRAY-uh) (Female)
    Character age: 15
    Character Species: Uvan, rebel
    Character Power: Hard, the power to control, direct, and harness strong energy (electricity, sunlight, ect.)
    Character Weapon: Electric whip (she can provide the electricity needed)
    Character History: Drea seems like a very strong, hard-working girl, but really, she's lazy. While other rebels are working, she likes to nap and relax. It seems that the only time she's ever interested in working is when it involves the Mera. Though she says otherwise, this is because of childhood trauma. Her family was taken hostage and killed by the Mera, and she just barely managed to escape. Now, she won't pass up a chance to fight.
    Description: Brown/Blonde hair, Blue-green eyes, tall, almost always looks bored.
     
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    Welcome aboard Charlie.
    But I only have five people. :(
    And thats not enough. Or at least I think.
    But you know what I am going to start it okay.
    Because I want to.
    Anyone else can join they just gotta PM me now with their character appilcation or something.
    I'll figure something out.:)
     
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    We're starting? That's good, but could I give you just a little piece of advise? Could you expand the plot a little more? The way it is now is, well, loose.
     
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    I'll try.
    I don't know how to though.
    I like the RP and plot and setting to create itself by the combination of many people's creativity.
     
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    I understand and I can respect that, maybe just an explanation of how their society works? How the classes behave between each other? And maybe an explanation on how the magic works? Just to prevent a sort of 'cheating', by that I mean players claiming they can do something because it's not mentioned that it can't be done, and 'anything-and-everything-goes' rule could be problematic on the long run.
     
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    There you go.
     
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    Thank you.
     
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    You're welcome.

    Well lets start this baby.
    Open the oven and take out the bread.
    If thats okay with everyone. :)
     
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    Um, I have a quick suggestion before we begin. It might be smart to make a few NPCs before we begin, to fill the game up with more players. You can make profiles for them on intro page, and people can take them over instead of making their own characters if they'd wish.

    It just sounds like the Mera will be a whole government, which would involve a lot of meetings with people of high power. That means we actually need to have people...
     
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    Okay.
     
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    Well, that's one less player...

    Should we each two characters, one Uvan and the other Rebel?

    Also, who here knows how to start an RPG?
     
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