The greatest issue for me is when to use break during dialogue. Sometime i stop a character from talking to quickly explain something, such as a characters though on the matter. He is something i wrote. can someone tell me if it's correct or now. Don't go correcting any grammar. i tend to just type what i have in my head. i will go through it later and make any changes. 'Third floor, room three-zero-nine Recruit Reynes. There will be a uniform waiting in your bed as well as a pair of boots.' Kayden remembered the measurements the Sergeant took of him during his interview. He wasn't expecting to just be accepted on the spot. The Sergeant continued, 'In thirty minutes there will be an official inauguration of all the new recruits. It will be held in the central building. Just leave this building and turn right, it's the large building straight ahead. Go around to the other side and enter through the double door. This leads into the cafeteria, which we also use as a meeting hall. You will be given further instructions on arrival.' Thankyou. and again, only correct me if i should of used a new line.