Is this too gruesome for a kids story?

Discussion in 'Plot Development' started by louis1, Apr 3, 2012.

  1. louis1

    louis1 Member

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    lol at least i'm getting a reaction, ahah I think this will always be shocking (i sure hope so) and that's probably why i've grown to love the idea so much since i posted this thread. i'm not trying to write shock value but it's fun to know that people will react to my novel, (in a good or bad way) to me it's better to piss some people off than to bore them to death ahaha
     
  2. Corgz

    Corgz New Member

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    I think it would be fine for a kids story... I mean, if its jsut a story inside the story it would be fine! its like the see-saw story that went around my school a few years back... it was hilarious! hahaha
     
  3. Pythonforger

    Pythonforger Carrier of Insanity

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    Didn't Loki get raped by a horse? And didn't the eldest ugly sister in Cinderella chop off her toes to fit her foot into the glass slipper?

    I think that children are much more receptive to this stuff than adults. I overheard a 10 year old arguing with his friend about how the directors of Saw made the Needle Pit.
     

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