Hey guys, just needed to vent after making major revisions on a story that I had written prior to my education in writing. Ive really learned alot about the importance of Character and plot development and believeability. It was so lacking in this story, but all in all I do think i know alot about it, I just need to practice it more. Grammar is an issue too but I'll work on that. Boy, i thought I had mastered my writing but I was wrong!. As a fellow writer once told me long ago "you have to be ego-less when you're writing". I didnt understand it then but I think I do now. Sorry if this post sounds immature but I just had to share LOL. Thanks for reading to those who did.