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    K~la - My Mistress Of Deceit Poetry Contest 21 Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Torana, Oct 13, 2007.

    Congratulations
    Poetry Contest Winner 21

    K~la - My Mistress Of Deceit

    She sings to me in my dreams
    that mistress of deceit.
    Hovering over me with sand
    to sprinkle in my eyes
    and suddenly we're 'neath the stars again.
    Dancing in the moonlight
    laughing playfully
    time freezes momentarily.
    Just the two of us now,
    eternity is ours.
    But then the darkness comes
    and I awake.
    She has fooled me once again,
    bringing me back to present reality.
     
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    Congratulations K~la! Good job :)
     
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    Great Poem. Congratualtions on your deserved win.
     
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    Well done - nice to see a new blood victor - here's to many more.
     
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    congrats k~la, an excellent piece. and well done to everyone else that entered, the entries were all brilliant. :D
    Heather
     
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    [tries to find suitable platitudes of congratulation but then they dry in his mouth like so many ashes]
     
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    Congrats on your win. ^^ Keep it up.
     
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    Woohoo!! Thanks all! I really wasn't expecting to win. But I guess I am my own worst critic. Again, thanks:)
     
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    A very deserving win K~la
     
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    Very nicely don, congratulations :)
     
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