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    lavendershy - Weekly Poetry Contest (110) Winner

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    Everwhere
    By lavendershy


    it's in their eyes, you know, the ship
    by rainbow-fancies manned
    the key, the path, the lightning-door
    the bridge to Everland

    and one by one they wander in
    as promised long before
    and only they can know the way
    the bridge to Evershore

    their feet are bare, their eyes are bright,
    they don't think to be proud
    that they can find in a shadow's blink
    the bridge to Evercloud

    we knew it, once, and though we laugh
    we'd give our all to find
    the only way, the child's way
    the bridge to Evermind.
     
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    Very nice! I really like it. :) Congrats, Lavender! :)
     
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    It's nice. I like it. When reading it, it makes you think.
     
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    Congratulations, lavendershy! :)
     
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    Aint that the truth the first part reminds me of Robert Lowell
     
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    that was beautiful... had a hint of the tennyson charm :)
     
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    Thanks, everyone! :)

    Cheers,
    lavendershy
     
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    Wow. That was really, really good. Really inventive rhymes.
     
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