Let's brainstorm the motives of a psychotic elder...

Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Link the Writer, Mar 5, 2011.

  1. KillianRussell

    KillianRussell New Member

    Joined:
    Feb 23, 2011
    Messages:
    618
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Glasshouse
    Just sayin' ,political correctness would have denied us Schindler's List
     
  2. Link the Writer

    Link the Writer Flipping Out For A Good Story. Contributor

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2009
    Messages:
    15,023
    Likes Received:
    9,676
    Location:
    Alabama, USA
    Okay, okay, you're both right. Sorry.

    Let's carry on. :D
     
  3. KillianRussell

    KillianRussell New Member

    Joined:
    Feb 23, 2011
    Messages:
    618
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Glasshouse
    the aftermath of ww1 left germany a bleak , bitter place ...great for writing with somber hues ... you will wear out every shade of gray in your crayon box....ya dig ?
     
  4. RobT

    RobT Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 22, 2009
    Messages:
    215
    Likes Received:
    40
    Location:
    Stoke-on-Trent, England
    Is she killing him out of compassion, like a mercy killing. Or is she being forced to by her family?
     
  5. Link the Writer

    Link the Writer Flipping Out For A Good Story. Contributor

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2009
    Messages:
    15,023
    Likes Received:
    9,676
    Location:
    Alabama, USA
    A little of both.
     
  6. KillianRussell

    KillianRussell New Member

    Joined:
    Feb 23, 2011
    Messages:
    618
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Glasshouse
    If you want to avoid a Hitler in the offing, why not set the story in Czechoslovakia ?
     
  7. Link the Writer

    Link the Writer Flipping Out For A Good Story. Contributor

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2009
    Messages:
    15,023
    Likes Received:
    9,676
    Location:
    Alabama, USA
    I don't even have to include Hitler. It's in 1915, right? Hitler would most likely be fighting in WWI.

    Of course, people will know what would happen in a few years (readers, I mean), and there will be folks in Germany that are anti-Semetic.
     
  8. RobT

    RobT Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 22, 2009
    Messages:
    215
    Likes Received:
    40
    Location:
    Stoke-on-Trent, England
    The next person to mention Hitler will be shot at dawn! :)
     
  9. KillianRussell

    KillianRussell New Member

    Joined:
    Feb 23, 2011
    Messages:
    618
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Glasshouse
    by 1915 there was a huge anti semantic rubbling ..why 1915 ?...what year did ww1 end ?....was not fingers pointed at the jews for the defeat ?..hitler did not invent the sentiment , hitler exploited sentiment
     
  10. RobT

    RobT Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 22, 2009
    Messages:
    215
    Likes Received:
    40
    Location:
    Stoke-on-Trent, England
    <BANG>

    Give us a paragraph Link the Writer, just to refresh roughly where you are.
     
  11. KillianRussell

    KillianRussell New Member

    Joined:
    Feb 23, 2011
    Messages:
    618
    Likes Received:
    22
    Location:
    Glasshouse
    You of German descent spinning understandable revisionist history ?
     
  12. Link the Writer

    Link the Writer Flipping Out For A Good Story. Contributor

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2009
    Messages:
    15,023
    Likes Received:
    9,676
    Location:
    Alabama, USA
    I haven't even started it yet, but the beginning goes something like this:

    Helga peered into the library, where young Otto was leaning against a bookcase reading a moldly book in his hands. She smiled sadly. He reminded her so much of herself when she was his age. She fingered the Mauser in her pocket and her heart froze. Did she really need to do this? But the visions were clear, so precise. The boy would suffer greatly in the near future.

    Pulling the Mauser out of her pocket, she aimed it at Otto's head.

    "Farewell, my friend....forgive me..." she muttered, tears streaming down her eyes.

    She pulled the trigger. Otto's body flinched, then crumpled lifelessly on the ground.
     
  13. Tessie

    Tessie Contributor Contributor

    Joined:
    Aug 8, 2010
    Messages:
    1,103
    Likes Received:
    62
    Location:
    Mass
    Wow, Link, quite the sober subject. You make me regret that I don't know more about WWI. But keep me updated on this, I really like the progression of your idea, intriguing!
     
  14. Link the Writer

    Link the Writer Flipping Out For A Good Story. Contributor

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2009
    Messages:
    15,023
    Likes Received:
    9,676
    Location:
    Alabama, USA
    Well, to be honest, I don't know that much about WWI either. =) I mean, I know how it happened, what happened, and how that lead into WWII, but that's pretty much it.
     
  15. Elgaisma

    Elgaisma Contributor Contributor

    Joined:
    Jun 12, 2010
    Messages:
    5,319
    Likes Received:
    97
    Hitler in WW1 was busy being recommended for the Iron Cross by a Jewish Officer.
     
  16. Link the Writer

    Link the Writer Flipping Out For A Good Story. Contributor

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2009
    Messages:
    15,023
    Likes Received:
    9,676
    Location:
    Alabama, USA
    Wow! I didn't know that. Very interesting. I also heard that the person who taught him how to perform speeches was also Jewish..
     
  17. Elgaisma

    Elgaisma Contributor Contributor

    Joined:
    Jun 12, 2010
    Messages:
    5,319
    Likes Received:
    97
    The evidence that Hitler was anti semetic is very weak - beyond it being a political tactic.
     
  18. Leonardo Pisano

    Leonardo Pisano Active Member

    Joined:
    Jan 21, 2011
    Messages:
    453
    Likes Received:
    13
    1915 --- The FED was just erected in 1914. The secret move is to get the Americans dragged into WWI (which happened in 1917) - to enrich a number of families in the US. The trigger for declaring war on Germany by the US was the assault on the Lusitania by U-boats (German submarines), May 1915. This was provoked. Maybe you can connect the shooting at the boy to this alleged conspiracy somehow?
    http://www.historylearningsite.co.uk/lusitania.htm
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice