Lets talk about Paradeisos

Discussion in 'Role Play Discussion' started by BlankLink, Mar 20, 2012.

  1. Love to Write

    Love to Write I'm a lover of writing. What else is to be said? Contributor

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    lol Blank link. I'm just going with the flow. Right now, MrMr has control of the scene.
     
  2. Zenithgo

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    I am willing to go with him... I will wait for Magnan to post here to see what he wants to do first before I post though.
     
  3. BlizzardHarlequin

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    I'll try and get a post up later if the mind allows me. I'm pretty much going ahead with whatever is happening between the three of us but of course I'm always up for whatever happens.
     
  4. The Magnan

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    We can escape or be caught I'm not bothered, however, if this Tom Wilde had the ability he has in the story I'm writing (time-based enhancements) he could get us out of this situation but its up to you, plus it's meant for stealthy purposes. Nothing more.
     
  5. Mr Mr

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    BlankLink - I was intending to go up the mountain and give LTW and BH characters an overview of the area, not sure what after that. If you want to steer us towards something thats fine.
     
  6. BlankLink

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    Mr Mr: Cool. Proceed then with showing the girls your abode. I'll steer you guys back in a bit.

    Magnan: If your ability can get you out of a situation where you're completely surrounded then it may be a bit too powerful. If you want it, though, pm me with an explanation of it and we'll come to a fair agreement on its limits.
     
  7. Zenithgo

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    I hope that the choices I made are ok with you guys (tom and hawke)
     
  8. The Magnan

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    I didn't intend to bring in its power, simply as Im using it in the story I'm writing. Tom is just flesh and blood....
     
  9. BlankLink

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    Alrighty. your call, man. But I'm not against it completely. If you'd like some enhancements let me know.

    You going to continue Blizz?
     
  10. BlankLink

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    MrMr: If Blizz doesn't post by tomorrow just run her character as an NPC who has accepted your invitation. She looks like she's quite busy with school and such. Which is fine, but its slowing the flow of the story and I'd hate for this thing to die before it even got started.

    Blizz: Feel free to pop back in at any time. We'll just carry Isa with us until you're ready if that works for you.
     
  11. The Magnan

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    Slightly confused, I apologise so on route to some campsite, there is Tom, Hawke, Pathos, a Lizard person, and Myr. In my next post, I will react each character to the best of my ability, if i miss anyone out, or there are gaping holes in my writing i apologise now.

    Edit: I did what I could incorpating whats happened into my post, I noticed the previous ones didn't incorporate Tom in some ways, no worries I worked my way around it. So let us continue onto this campsite. I have to say, I'm enjoying this.
     
  12. Mr Mr

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    BlankLink - Good thinking I was just going to ask the same thing. I'll post now.
     
  13. BlankLink

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    Glad to hear it, Mag! I know its a slow start but we should be getting somewhere soon. The RPGs seem to die off for the weekends and I was worried it wouldnt pick back up.
     
  14. Mr Mr

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    Ok got my post up. Gave a small description of the place and an idea of where everything is (hope I didn't mess anything up.)

    Anyone know when BlizzardHarlequin will be back?
     
  15. BlankLink

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    You didn't, but...

    Its been established that monsoon season will be approaching soon.

    I have to ask that we all pay attention to these details so we have minimum plot holes. There will be some, I'm sure, and we should all watch each others backs to catch them. Lets edit our posts accordingly and continue to have an awesome game.

    I don't know when or if Blizz will be back. She looks like she doesn't log very frequently.

    Also, rockabye: I love your alien. She's awesome, and your use of color for her thoughts intrigues me. A few of my critiques are: please capitalize the first letters in your sentences, and watch the "woulds". When you say

    It sounds as though she does this all the time. Think: "Grampa would always smoke those cigars."

    Otherwise, great work people. I'm interested in every ones character and am eager to get to know them better!
     
  16. Mr Mr

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    Oh sorry, I'll edit it to a raindrop?
     
  17. BlankLink

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    Works for me.

    Okay, so the situation Mr, Blizz, and Love are in right now can be solved however you would like. You might destroy the hitmen, or they miscalculate where you leave the mountain, or it might be interesting to have Eerie getting captured. You can kill off, or brutalize all of them if you would like except one of the named henchmen (Hari, Garren, or Meglesh) and three of the others.

    Have at it, you three!
     
  18. Love to Write

    Love to Write I'm a lover of writing. What else is to be said? Contributor

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    Blanklink....I love your post!!!!!!

    I'm so excited to see what happens next.
     
  19. Mr Mr

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    Just a thought, how are the hitmen going to get up the mountain?
     
  20. BlankLink

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    Oh they aren't. They're going to watch where you climb down, and then ambush you when you get back into the woods.
     
  21. Zenithgo

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    So sorry magnan, I really didn't mean to leave you out it just don't know tom well enough to speak in his voice so I was a little scared to. I will try to do better to involve the whole party. also my new post will be up later today.
     
  22. Mr Mr

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    I've got my post up but I won't be online til next tuesday :(
    I would love for this to still be running when I get back.
     
  23. Love to Write

    Love to Write I'm a lover of writing. What else is to be said? Contributor

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    Apparently MrMr has given me control of Eere. Wish me luck! :)
     
  24. Rockabye

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    sorry i dont think i can get a post out this weekend irl hit hard. jsut skip myr for a min?
     
  25. Zenithgo

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    So, I am sorry I haven't posted in a few... busy week/ weekend for me anyway I will be back monday, so fear not the book won't die.
     

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