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    LordKyleofEarth, "A Loose Thread" Poetry Contest Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Torana, Jul 16, 2009.

    The
    88th
    Poetry Contest
    Winner!

    theme (courtesy of Myself) is: A Loose Thread

    Congratulations, LordKyleOfEarth.

    Regret - LordKyleOfEarth
    A loose thread,
    so careless and free
    She lacks moral fiber,
    she isn't me.

    She spent today on my sweater,
    last night on my sheets.
    She has no real standards,
    stays with whomever she meets.

    I'm not that thread,
    I'm never so free.
    Her life is exciting,
    That thread isn't me.
     
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    Congratz, Lord Kyle, you had a wonderful poem.
     
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    Thanks everyone! This made my day :)
     
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    This was a tough choice. There were a couple of the poems I was tempted to vote for, but I voted for this one because it was both well constructed and an excellent interpretation of the theme.
     
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    Wow, you sure did stomp me there. xD Congratulations! :)
     
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    you seem so envious of her...
     
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    LordKyle is a she? :/ Of the position, I'm not envious, but maybe more on the literary talent. :]
     
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