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    Lydia - Weekly Poetry Contest (106) Winner

    Discussion in 'Bi-Weekly Poetry Contest Archives' started by Banzai, Mar 5, 2010.

    Be Mine
    By Lydia


    Bury my head
    In my pillow
    Help me to drown
    All my fears
    Lead gently the doubt
    To the gallows

    And tell me the answer is near.


    When hope’s heart
    Has stopped thumping
    Whisper me
    All will be fine
    Stab down the fear
    Wildly jumping

    Let clarity enter my mind.


    Softly wipe off my cold tears
    That causes my heart to freeze
    Scatter out the ashes of wrong
    To fly along with the breeze
    Smother the outcry of sorrow
    And keep me safe all night
    Maybe then I will know
    That everything’s allright.
     
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    Well done Lydia - a lovely little piece.
     
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    Congratulations! I really liked it from the start!:)
     
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    Congrats Lydia, nice piece you got thar :p
     
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    Thanks a lot guys! I'm really happy to have won! :D
     
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    This is awesome! Great job!
     
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