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    Marshall41 - Weekly Poetry Contest (113) Winner

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    T.I.A. (This is Africa)
    By Marshall41


    Dey call me Baby Killer man
    And we must shed deir Blud
    For foreigners is killin us
    And pissin in our fuod

    Dey think we are just children ya
    And not dat smart to kill
    But we hav guns and medicine
    Dat make us strong from ill

    Our fam’lies are da bad ones here
    Dey kiss da boss man shoe
    But we kill all dem traitors dead
    Or beat dem black and blue

    Dey call me Baby Killer man
    And blud is runnin deep
    Up in my Nike shoes I got
    To hide my child feet
     
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    thanks for all the votes guys
     
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    Wow I really liked reading this and thought it was not only creative but that it had a lot of emotion and feeling to it. I look forward to reading more.
     
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    I'm really not a poetry man - I just stumbled upon this by accident - but seriously, this is good stuff man! :)
     
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