How do you add menace, tension and malevolent energy to a scene? I'm writing a scene were a little girl is playing with a doll and stops because she senses something bad. She ends up going over and closing the window. The problem is I've never had such a hard time creating the right feeling. I want the reader to 'hear' the music in the background that tells them something's not right without actually saying that something isn't right. So how do you do that? Any tips?