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    Mr Darcy with nipple clamps Bryony-Gordonreview EL Jamess Grey

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    "Music to my dick."

    Ha ha ha. I read half of the second book but couldn't finish it.

    I'm surprised the author didn't learn a little about writing before she wrote this new one. With so many people criticizing the way she uses the same phrases over and over (such as everyone's cheeks flushing), you'd think she'd try to cut that out. But maybe she never even read any of the criticisms or thought, "Hey, it sold the first time. I don't have to change the way I write."
     
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    The next person to tell me the difference between erotica and porn is the character development and fully developed plot and dares to use Grey (or FSOG) as an example of the former will receive a peeled ginger root up their rectum.
     
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