I've spent a lot of time lately, rethinking nearly all my plots for stories I intend to write, and one I done with my fantasy is I hope ok. The main plot is that two elven races one High Elf and Dark Elf are at war in a place known as the Darne. The Darnmar are the ones in control, and are planning on trying to purify the rest of the world, and in return achieve ascendancy. After all they puppets of the god Puritos. Whilst the Panthos Dark Elves suffer, under the wave of losses and their dying goddess. The events in Darne coincide with events in Sycane, as a portion of Black Dragon legionairies flee their annihilation. They march unwittingly into the Darne unaware of the war that has consumed this land. Led by Magnafire Drake, the army now known as Burnt only wanted to hide from the White Tallon but soon they will end up getting caught up in the war. So basically the importance is that their is a lot of convergence on the Dominion, and another important thing, the Magnan had a bound sword, a blade he fashioned because well his anscestors were Edge, and they had the power to forge a spiritually linked blade. Unfortunately, Magnafire lost the blade during the rise of Tallon and the swords spiritual form now wanders a dead warren. So whilst the story follows events in the dominion, it also follows the Magnan as he aims to reunite with his lost blade. A blade that constantly reminds him of one thing 'I am your Mortal Blade, and Sanities Edge' - The Blade Edge I want to know if there is any suggestions on how I can possibly improve upon it. Edit: I've tried to make it clear, I apologise that before it was pretty difficult to read.