Hey guys My cousin is writing a story and she's almost doing the same thing I do in my latest story: she keeps the narrator an unknown person until near the end of the novel. I told her it's not a good idea for her. The reason is that MY story is not about the narrator and she/he just tells the story, she/he even says that in the story; that she/he may be a part of it, but the story is not about her/him . and then I give clues until the middle/near the end of the story the reader is given direct statement to know if they were right about their guess... But my cousin's story is about its narrator... I think she should not keep the person's identity secret. I don't know... What do you guys think? What's your opinion about her narrator and mine?