Hello everyone! New member here. I have recently come up with an idea that I am very interested in creating and publishing. However, I seriously need help with filling in the gaps and figuring out the rest of my plot. This is a bit lengthy, so I'm sorry! But I really need feedback and help. I think that this could become a huge hit if I could get set in the right direction with it. So, please take the time!! This whole idea actually came to me in a dream, so it's hard to fill in gaps when dreams switch from one setting to another. Any help is extremely appreciated! This is what I can remember: The main character is a girl, age ~15-16ish who is dealing with a case of extreme rebellion against her parents. This all takes place over the summer when the girl doesn't have school going on. In my dream, the girl had an obsession with going to concerts. Sneaking out and doing things against her parents will. But in the actual story I wish to create, I think it'd be better if it was something a little... Well, worse than going to concerts. I think it should actually come to the case of getting arrested. Drinking underage multiple times and doing insane things kids should not be doing. Basically, doing teenage-like things but to a greater extent than what you normally see in the teenage-rebellion stage. So, after going through this for months on end, the parents of the girl can't handle her behavior (the setting was in the city) so they send her off to live with her mother's aunt who lives a while away (I'd say a state away somewhere outside of the city would be preferred, but I don't want it too cliche). They hope that time outside of her friends setting a bad influence and the city where things can influence bad behavior will calm her down and change her to be more mature. Her aunt is currently taking care of another boy, who actually looks to be about 19-21. In my dream he was about 3-4 years older, and looked kind of Greek with his curly black hair. He was staying with her aunt because _____________(NEED HELP WITH THIS!!!) With him (I do not know what his name should be) and the main character girl living under the same roof for a summer, they got to know each other better and became close friends. The boy barely talked. I need more story here. The girl ended up making a friend who also happened to be a bit older than her, who lived in the same neighborhood. The friend was around 17-18 years old. They became fast friends and pretty much spent everyday together (need more story; more ideas). This is where it all becomes a bit blurry and things weren't so specific, so I seriously need help from here on. The things I remember are the guy coming home late one night and looking like a dark, dark shadow with blood dripping from his hands and face. He didn't look human. The girl saw him by accident, and promised she wouldn't say anything. This was never explained to her by him, but I know in my dream that the guy had the ability to stop time. He had been sent to earth by an unknown being. Whether it was God or whether he was an alien, I don't know and it's never really answered (if this becomes a serious thing). He has a number of people he has been ordered to kill for doing _________(I'm not too sure what the reason should be. Should it be because of committing one of the sins? Should it be something that a number of separate people have that others don't that his planet is harvesting? I don't really know). I also don't know whether or not he should be good or bad (evil or not evil). Oh, and just to mention: The night he came back all bloody and looking like a shadow with blood, he had a run-in with the opposite side (whatever side it is) and couldn't fulfill the role of killing whoever it was because they got in the way, and ended up fighting. He survived, the other didn't. Anyway, whatever his reason is, the main character girl ends up being on the list. He has to kill her. But by the time he gets notice of this, he's already fallen in love with her. So he spares her and intends to kill her new friend instead (time was stopped at this part. Her friend was sleeping over, and the main character girl and guy were talking. This is where she learned of his time-stopping ability). She asks him to spare her friend, and he nods, then disappears and she doesn't seem him come back. The next morning her aunt and friend have no recollection of him ever being there. So, he has the ability to implant false memories/ideas into someone's mind. He was never there with a family, it was just him trying to do his duty. And that's about all I can remember. I need as much feedback as possible! Anything is appreciated. And thank you so much for taking the time to read this!