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    Need some help please

    Discussion in 'General Writing' started by yankeekd25, Oct 3, 2008.

    I need to revise a paper for English class by extending my argument using an addition essay we read in class. The thing is I have no idea how to do such a thing, and my teacher isn't of much help. If I posted some of my original essay, summaries of the essays we read, and the revision prompt is there any way I could get some help? I seriously have no idea how to revise my paper. Thank you.
     
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    The sites policy is that we cannot help you with your homework. You have to do the work not us.

    I can offer advice. Revising is easy. Just read the piece and find things you think can be better and write them again in a way you think is better. Its a very simple process. Read, change, rewrite. In your case, all you need t extend an argument is more examples and arguments to support your position. A little more research and planning makes it a simple process of getting new material and inserting it into what you already have.
     
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