Needs more to the plot... Yes, my title gives the problem away. I've written just the outline of a story, but I'm afraid it doesn't have much of a twist. The book is about three friends that go on an adventure but all I have is that they're tricked into releasing a mythical army into their world. They find a way to stop it by breaking into a vault which tells them. Does it need more of a plot? Or, more exactly, any suggestions?