Well, im from Aus, i've allways enjoyed creative writing (weather of not im good at it is up to you!) and so am trying my hand at writing a short horror story. most of my insparation i get from music (as my name says, rammstein's song mein teil gave me the insparation fror the plot) and other books. also would you mind rating my story pot. thanks 1)girl (blond w/ blue eyes also virgin) wakes in a dull room with noyl a dull green light, a strange beast lying behind her (if you guess the music reference you get an e - cookie!) 3 men enter, in dark robes, blah de blah, shes sacraficed and her life force sent onto the creature chained beside her (this is leviathan, warden of hell who the r-tatrds are trying to resarect). 2) cops find her body in a river, investigation happens. im still working on the rest.