OK so i have this idea that i have been working on for a while now. almost got the first book done too im just wondering whether or not the plot for it is good or if theirs any problems. The story is about a therapist whos nephew that has these delusional walk offs were he doesn't remember anything goes missing. When the police say that unless there is evidence of him being harmed or in danger they will not step in to help him. unhappy with this answer he decides to go look for him out in the Mohave desert towns. along they way he faces the fact that hes going crazy and there's allot of strange stuff going on in the back story. if anyone has any potholes they noticed or anything they would like to add to it just let me know.