Ive decided to start creative writing as a hobby. This is my first story, I'm sure its filled with heaps of mistakes! ..... but yeah can anyone help me fix my errors? My grammar, correct use of words, sentence structure etc is horrible, anyways thank you. At midnight, a clueless entity walks alone. Surrounded by effervescent lights that shine bright, the entity has become blinded and dazed. The entity has entered a colorful world full of superficial beauty. Deluded and lascivious, the clueless entity wants what he can’t have. Searching amidst a sea of cosmetic faces,muscular bodies and luscious hair the entity does not realize he is frowned upon and is not welcome here. He is but a gremlin, an outsider with no welcome mat.